A sudden death
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ON MY LAPTOP
Writing in a hurry and grieving... what is happening to me? Time ran out and frantically I... I try typing on HubPages... but my hands start getting weak and eventually light as a feather...and then breaking apart. Wishful thinking, I didn't make it to finish this hub...
WHAT IS HAPPENING?
On my desk at work, on my computer I'm checking CNN.COM, then I hear a voice. A break in and.. "Your time has come buddy...Now what are you going to use as an excuse, huh?"
A coarse demonic voice that announced my departure from this world. As I turned around I saw a fire and then a bullet that... in slow motion aimed at my face. Quick enough, and instinctively I duck myself and the bullet barely kissed my head and hit the wall behind me. "It was your fault! and you are ready to go..." Is Fred, a coworker who got fired four months ago.
He is reloading his handgun and he knew by being myself on the floor, I had no chance. I started to pray and waiting for my end. My spirit leaves my body and goes to the screen and signs in. In seconds I managed to log in and start writing about my own sudden death... This seems a crazy nightmare!
Two Coworkers that saw him on the surveillance cameras jump behind him but kind of too late. The final bullet enters my brain and slashed my life in less that a second. My memory, my child life, my own mother and my kids... all of them try to stop the bullet but is too late. My eyes are losing sight and slowly the day turns into shadows and words from the past; my teacher, my father, my dogs...all just disappeared from my view and finally cease to breath. My soul and spirit had little time to write this hub... I see myself leaving this world... My coworkers put him down and called the cops. tragic enough my own soul sweats after seeing my own death.
Women just shouted my name in despair. I'm gone! I'm another victim of this world's violence. I write this hub as a witness of my own death. Suddenly I see my eyes... they open themselves and no! I just exhaled my last breath. With sorrow I see myself finally gone. I close the hub and Leave the room.
I see myself passing that tunnel. Again I see my whole life in no time. Voices that I forgot pass me by. Then a blast and I get sucked by the light... Finally I see myself in the operating room. A delicate surgery to my open brain... lots of blood and the Doctor doing his best to get my life back. My body is pale and I'm lifeless. I try to help. But they cannot even see me. "Cardiac arrest, Murphy! EKG below safe levels... We are losing him! Damn! AED Defibrillator Nurse!"
My last chance is exhausted. I finish my last sentences and I leave this page...to join my own destiny...
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Wow what a unique idea, scary, yet spellbinding. Think i'll stay home today.......
We are always one step away from dying...had few scary moments in my life and it made me to appreciate life even more...beauty and horror are tangled together forever just like in your piece of writing:)
Well BEATA,
This story can be so real..that words cannot compare with that moment..when we have to leave..our planet. Thanks for your important comment my friend...Hello down under!
LORD
Nice comment, Beata! "Beauty is only terror, when terror is just beginning" - Jim Carrol
Hi moeflats,always exploring,
Your comments are also welcomed, had a long day yesterday... and checking out today, I see your comments and Moeflats, you have a deep understanding of the situation. We are implied our destiny and tend to believe this is it for us in the shadow gearing of life. The 99 percenters are doing what most are just looking the other way. You cannot hide the status quo and If it comes close to a post French revolution then be it! Death has an appointment with each of us.
Yes! Better to die fighting than to leave the world like a pathetic sycophant. Being as we die eventually anyhow, why hold back? I couldn't fathom leaving this world after silently taking abuse from unknown forces.
I have attempted to elucidate what we are dealing with. While I have not been so successful with the question of WHO, I've come up with some methods that are very effective for escaping these strange situations. If you should feel so inclined, check me out. I bet you'll find it interesting at the very least!
Thanks again Jim,
your comments are always welcomed. Will check your work also,
LORD
How about somebody wakes you up and you were just dreaming that you wrote a hub as a ghost writer-literally!! God bless you with a long life, happy and healthy with lots of friends and no enemies at all.
carrie
Hi Carry,
Thanks for your comments. You took a nerve and ..well, what you read it is what you read. Was something weird, but is there...for you to read. Thanks and nice to see you again
LORD
You wrote about near death and I had a dream several nights ago, that someone broker in and this man shot me. Not once, not twice but three times. It was so frightening it woke me up out of a deep sleep! If you interpet the dream it means that I was feeling victimized by something in my life. Or it can mean that I am on the straight and narrow path, it just depends on the scene in its entirety. It is etched in my memory bank. :( I have had a near death experience but that is sitting in a different hub. That is why I have so much faith in God. :) You writing is wonderful my dear brother! :)
Hi, AEvans,
The hub was written with no bad intentions. It was written and is there. We cannot stop a final destination. But having faith in God, will change the picture, since guardian angels are out there for us. Your dream, was a nightmare and don't need...or doesn't mean it will happen one day.
LORD
Workplace violence is serious stuff. I work in a financial institution on the weekends (NOT a bank) and one of our biggest threats is a crazy person who lost all his money or an executive who was laid off and comes back half out of his mind. Im glad this was just a story and I hope it is never anything any of us really get to deal with. Its too real and so scary. You did an excellent job portaying the fear.
Hi Ardie.
Thanks for stopping by and commenting, you are certainly right...no one is free of these kind of peOple, especially today. Only God knows when we will have to depart.
LORD
interesting...
We all have a final call meeting with Mr. so feared death. Not even Bill Gates money or the late Steve Job's can buy you eternal life. Unless...
Wow, Lord! What a hub! Hadn't seen you much lately, (yeah, kind of missed ya!) so I thought I'd mosey over here to see what you're up to. Stumbled across this hub. Powerful stuff. Perhaps you caught what goes through somebody's head as they're dying. So fast, so clear, frantic yet almost peaceful. Hard to explain. I loved how your put this one together. I was seriously spellbound until the end. Good to read your stuff again!
Glad you are back. This is powerful and realisitic.
MOEFLATS Level 2 Commenter 7 months ago
Yup, you most certainly CAN cheat death these days. I've had several cases where I was told that "this is the last: day/hour/minute you have on Earth." It's more IMPLIED than anything else. These are the people who everyone knows about, but nobody talks about. I talk about them because: I dislike a shadow government with unwritten: rules, restrictions and edicts. Furthermore, I despise un-official authority and enjoy coming as close to "death" as possible.
You can get someone to die simply by getting them to THINK they will. People in line to have horrific experiments performed on them often dropped dead waiting to have these procedures done in Nazi Germany. Thusly, you can fake someone into dying with enough fear and implied impending death "hints". If you REFUSE TO EMOTIONALLY RESPOND, THEY LOSE THEIR POWER OVER YOU.
This is a synthetic death that can be cheated by something I call CREATIVE DISBELIEF. You find something to LISTEN TO that makes you feel good and you build a "synthetic paradise" in your mind, generated by positive thinking and this music. It is crucial NOT TO talk to anyone during one of these things. If your concentration is broken for a second during one of these "implied impending death attacks", you can lose your grip and go spiralling down into this "synthetic death reality". THEY CAN USE: Binaural beats to simulate just about any emotion or physical feeling and even stimulate your outer-muscles to pull in all sorts of directions. They can shock you pretty hard, too.
It's like electronically-enhanced-Voodoo. Many seem almost "possessed" by this phenomenon. Who's doing it? I don't rightly know. I would guess that it would be an organization designed to rid society of "undesirables". I admit it: I'm out to bring this "Kingdom of Fear" down. It exists, many have admitted to it's existence, but intentionally refused to give any further information. When you become aware of something with this magnitude of power, procrustean moral standards and a policy that they must "frighten you with pre-death" instead of using bullets - you feel a NEED to push against it. This organization has rigged my car to not slow down at high speeds, had someone point a gun at me on the highway and even did a very realistic "pre-death theme" by playing the refrain from "Hotel California" for 4 hours followed by a "fake heart attack sequence".
The key for the average joe to stand firm against these "moral watchdogs" is to know that they won't physically-harm or directly kill you: they must get you to kill yourself, scare you into dying or threaten you into submission. They do have some "wicked illusions", but we have to do the work of eliminating ourselves. Just DON'T BELIEVE ANYTHING and you'll be virtually un-stoppable.