Touching the night

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By lord de cross

Enjoy the song...

Tonight I'm free to write whatever I want to

getting the pulse of my heart ready to jump in

feeling the vibes of a song enticing my brain

to write words that could tune in


Found a way to write with no problem at all

loving a song I can go as far as I want

putting togethers a senseless and stupid wording

that at the end rules the scene through the next morning



cannot stop doing this routine that goes with no end

grabbing tridimensional thoughts that carve deep within

emotional disturbance that carries a message to the savvy

no time and space enough to describe this installment for so many


feeling the night growing cold and rough

I cover my senses with the dictation from the one I know

touching and caressing the night

I feel free to come to terms with my own mind


the music and my imagination create a tsunamy with no end

waves from my brain reaching yours across this rain

hopefully I will be able to feel the night

and rest enought to wake up on time


my muse is dancing behind me and telling me what to write

moving hips and clapping her hands

I can keep touching the night calling your name

morning is almost here and this writing was not done in vain


rotating the rhythm of my heart can cause sudden infatuation

music and the tune can involved my being with no explanation

thank God I'm used to write like this, otherwise oh my..!

closing for now..I see through my window the early hours that...killed the night!




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Cyndi10 profile image

Cyndi10 Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

Great! I like the line "My muse is dancing behind me..." This is such a nice blend of the love for writing and the love of music and dance. Well done!

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lord de cross Hub Author 3 months ago

Hi there Cyndi10,

Thanks for your comment. This was just a rant from my mind. Didn't think this hub was worth to get published, but I did push a little to make it a little long. The tune did help though...Was touching the essence of a night that was wearing out in front of me. Thanks for stopping by!

LORD

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picklesandrufus Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

I like the way your creative thoughts seem to be released with the music. Nice description of what was going through your mind at the time.

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lord de cross Hub Author 3 months ago

Thanks pickles&rufus!

This was just a vent that I did last night. Loved the tune and I started to write. Have a nice one! and thanks for the visit!

LORD

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Gypsy Rose Lee Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

What a treasure this poem is. I loved it. Voted up and awesome. It has a nice rhythm to it.

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lord de cross Hub Author 3 months ago

You think so Gypsy Rose?

Was just letting myself go, following the rythm and my imagination.

Thanks for stopping by!

LORD

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Ardie Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

I've missed your poems SOOOO much! I'm happy to see you back and writing again :D

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Ivona Poyntz 3 months ago

Niiice. As usual!

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lord de cross Hub Author 3 months ago

Thanks Ardie and Ivona,

Your comments are very appreciated, hope to see you again!

LORD

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

"muse dancing behind me" is great!

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lord de cross Hub Author 3 months ago

Sure PDX!

I felt those hips behind me...following the sound and whispering her intentions behind my ears...like a enticing prize for me, the writer..after done! Thanks Justin!

LORD

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 2 months ago

that's the best way to be approached by the muse, I have found.

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lord de cross Hub Author 2 months ago

You are right PDX!

our muse is always around, dropping notes and even criticizing us...Can you believe that? Thanks for stopping by!

LORD

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 2 months ago

i can... u just have to know where to look!

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lord de cross Hub Author 2 months ago

Like right now..Lol! Good night my friend!

LORD

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mary615 Level 8 Commenter 2 months ago

I missed this one, Lord! It's beautiful as usual. Keep on writing, you hear? Night, night

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lord de cross Hub Author 2 months ago

Hi Mary, I hear you!! Lol! Thanks! Nighty!

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