Woman! Don't stop loving me!

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By lord de cross

Here we go again..! (enjoy the song)

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Here we go again woman!

Your wishes finally prevailed

Time has come to tell your tale

you said you wanted to reveal me a secret?

I'm waiting as I move my body to this music


Say what? come closer to me

you will never what? I cannot really see!

what you mean by that, looking strayed and sick

sick of not being bold enough to stick with me


Okay! take an extra deep breath

Oh there you go, stop for God's sake!

you are getting used to my move

grabbing my tie, getting me on that mood


Never stop..stop what woman?

say it again, the music is loud enough

to barely hear your claims, would you stop!

stop looking at me that way, causing me to laugh


Now you are getting to the point

Embracing my shoulders from behind

whispering to my ears the words right on time

that you want me to make you mine?


so you chose this song to keep things clear?

Now I get it finally sweet baby... oh dear!

you are accomplishing so much tonight

already caressing my senses and my mind

about to blow inside big, big time!


Getting your message baby, please calm down

let's dance this song, and the rest will come around

on time to hold you close to me non stop

like the song, never stop! And I won't stop

you made me realize that love is a gift

that we have to keep covered by all means


Lucky you chose this song

so I know when love is already found

won't stop you from loving me

is already a need that was instilled in me

You see how I can't stop moving around you

full of joy and happy that love has finally found us


Sinchronize your heart beat with mine

finally you got it, two souls of a kind

moving and dancing such fools under the rain

Jumping over the cliff of reason, over and over again


this was such a great experience, you conquered my love

and now is time to grow together, because this is only the beginning

not such word as ending a living without you at the very end

was exquisitely fun, the luckiest of all men, started to belong



say it again and again...we won't be friends from now on

got carried away by your charm added to this song

time to go away and make this happen until early hours of dawn

lets walk away sweetheart, the purpose of this song is done...

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JT Walters 5 months ago

I am blushing and it is good. My oh my Lord.

JT

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PurvisBobbi44 Level 7 Commenter 5 months ago

Lord,

WOW! WOW! I believe my mind just went on vacation--or the music and poem blew it away.I voted up, beautiful and awesome. I might need a glass of wine after this one.

WOW!

Your Hub Friend,

Bobbi

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lord de cross Hub Author 5 months ago

Are you okay JT? Now you are gonna blame for passing out? Hope not. Thanks so much for your encouragement... and hope to read you soon!

LORD

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lord de cross Hub Author 5 months ago

Hello BOBBI,

You should be careful..more than 3 wows becomes spammy,,,you know? Seriously! Thanks my friend for being a loyal follower.

LORD

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Sunshine625 Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Oh Lord! Very clever and creative! :)

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lord de cross Hub Author 5 months ago

Sunshine625,

Thanks dear friend. Congrats! On the 'Elite bagde' added to your profile! You are kind enough to check on us and praise our work. Thanks Sunshine!

LORD

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Sunshine625 Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Lord you're too funny!! Its just an E for excellent or extraordinary!! lol Thank you:)

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lord de cross Hub Author 5 months ago

You should write a personal letter to MR. 'E', better than writing to BSB or Ricky Martin. I wonder if there are funny people on both ends of the singing 'tale'

P.S. Is Mr 'E', not mister Ed.

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Sunshine625 Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

I'll take that into consideration if Mr. E works out. At the moment the E seems more work than entertainment. Eeeek!

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shanaya Level 4 Commenter 5 months ago

Hey Sir Lord! WOW, It's going RED every where. We are blushing because of your Lovely Poem.

And I Hope my big WOW is enough for describing your wonderful and sensual poem. LOL

Voted up, beautiful, awesome, interesting.

with lots of Respect

from SHANAYA:)

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JT Walters 5 months ago

Lord,

#@!!, what....? You made me swoon but I have come to realize you have do that to alot of your readers.

;-)

JT

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mikeq107 Level 5 Commenter 5 months ago

LOL ..normaly these poems are written by women...great write Mate...thanks for a good morning laugh!!!!!

Mike :0)

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lord de cross Hub Author 5 months ago

Thanks for your comment Shanaya. You always so nice to your hub friends. This Poem was written between 1 or 2 a.m. with my 'insighful friends', and there you have it.

Thanks again!!

LORD

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lord de cross Hub Author 5 months ago

There you go again JT,

Made you swoon? The problem started when you stopped by. I should warn ladies before reading..Do you think?

LORD

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lord de cross Hub Author 5 months ago

Mike bro!

You are welcome my friend. We have some extra feelings for that extra mile in writing...we don't want to sound too corny either. But we like what we do.

LORD

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Ardie Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

This is so much fun. I can echo the chorus of wow's :D I bet you had a right fun time writing this one!!

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JT Walters 5 months ago

Absolutely, Caution labels on all of your poems!! "This poem may make you swoon only read it lying down!!"

;-)

JT

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Ardie Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Hahah JT that about covers it right? Lord is the Lord of words and will make the ladies purr and pile in heaps.

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MartieCoetser Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Dear Lord, the beat of "You'll never stop me loving" - (the continues hits on the drum that sound like the beating of a heart) - stimulates the crocodile brain which contains our most primordial urges. So your woman was very wise to add her charm to the song :))

I enjoyed the poem and voted it up and interesting.

Lord de cross 5 months ago

MartieCoetser,

Certainly you are right!! no wonder that body language is the key--thanks!

Lord...via Iphone

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bethperry Level 6 Commenter 5 months ago

Sweet. I like the optimism in it very much!

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lord de cross Hub Author 5 months ago

Thanks Ardie and politically corrrect Bosch:), I mean

JT walters, future CEO in wall street. The poem was inspired on the song and the main chorus...yeah ! is fun how we do it. Only God Knows..how we end this poem. Great to read you both, doing a 'mano a mano'!

LORD

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lord de cross Hub Author 5 months ago

Hi Bethperry,

Yeah! A very moving piece of poetry, that goes with beat. Glad you ejnoyed too dear hub friend.

LORD

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epigramman 5 months ago

...that's why you're our precious LORD - you've got the funnest hubs around - is that a word - funnest? well it is now courtesy of epi-man who is a student of dance and body language (I simply adore the ballet) and I have been listening to Jimi Hendrix and Hank Williams Sr. on my first night off in over a week - and yes this hub just wants me to get up and dance!

lake erie time 1:29am

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lord de cross Hub Author 4 months ago

Hello there Epi,

Funnest? Well we can invent the words, and the Queen will have to knight the new addition to the Royal Academy. We love Music and love those beats! Thanks Epi for your words! You are one of the finest man on Hubland, and the ladies agreed upon!

LORD

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